Construction of video

BY FERN DISNEY

This is not more completed final coursework. There are still gaps however I wanted to show my progression throughout this task so I decided to upload the draft to youtube in order to explain and analyse the changes in which I intend to change between now and the final upload...

1st shot change...

00:55-01:01

The first shot I wish to change will be this one. This is because I find this one is still for too long. Therefore I will go back to the original clip and change what part I have decided to use. Therefore the audience aren't left watching the same thing for too long. I will be changing this to a zoom in shot from a long shot of the desk to a close up of the noticeboard.

2nd Shot Change...

03:33-03:46

During the bridge I have a couple of different clips shown in this draft- showing post stick notes on a wall and her tidying her bed up. However, I want to improve the shots in this bridge further. The first way I will do this is but cutting down the length of the post stick shot, this is because even though I think the length works in the speed of the song, I believe because of the handling of my camera, the focus pulls in and out much more than I would prefer. Therefore, I have decided to half this and include other shots which I took on the same day- including a pan of shoes on the floor and mess on the bedroom floor. This way I think it shows the difference that my character is trying to make in her life.

Finally, what you watch the draft linked above, I have actually removed the music for this piece so it isn't restricted by copyright- I will be uploading my final work on another program. There is also a small black bit at the end of the video because it is not complete- this will be filmed tomorrow and edited on monday so the final edit will be completed then.